作者leo1208 (活到老打到老)
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標題[Ask ] [ask]please help me grammer
時間Mon Oct 14 16:52:36 2013
Hi everybody, please help me check the grammer of following sentence, thank you.
1.According to the Tobacco Hazards Prevention Act, both indoor and outdoor areas are designated as no smoking area.
2.Anyone who smokes in this area will be fined NT $ 2000 to NT$ 10000.
3.Thank you for supporting the smoke-free Maple Snow Garden.
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1F：→ sidh97:1. both the indoors and outdoors are designated as 10/15 11:02
2F：→ sidh97:smoke free areas. (sounds better than no smoking) 10/15 11:03
3F：→ sidh97:2. will be fined FROM 2000 NTD to.....etc etc 10/15 11:05
4F：→ sidh97:(i dont think you use the $ if it's not 'dollar') 10/15 11:05
5F：→ sidh97:3. good. (for 1.use either non-smoking or smoke-free. 10/15 11:07
6F：→ lisaweng:2. anyone smoking in these areas are subject to a 10/15 19:55
7F：→ lisaweng:fine up to NT$10000 10/15 19:56
8F：→ lisaweng:Sry. I meant "is subject to". 10/15 19:59
9F：→ leo1208:Thanks everyone. It's helpful. 10/15 20:45
10F：推 Smallmi:Re 1, do you just mean that smoking is prohibited in 10/15 22:16
11F：→ Smallmi:'all' areas? 10/15 22:17
12F：推 Smallmi:Re 2, Anyone who smokes in "these" areas will be fined 10/15 22:21
13F：→ Smallmi:a minimum of NTD2000, up to....(NT$2000 is ok since 10/15 22:22
14F：→ Smallmi:$ does mean 'dollar'. 10/15 22:23
15F：→ Smallmi:Re 3, Thank you for supporting a smoke-free 10/15 22:24
16F：→ Smallmi:environment in the Maple Snow Garden. 10/15 22:24
17F：→ Smallmi:and btw, it's 'grammar' :) 10/15 22:25
18F：→ leo1208:Yes, all area. But most smoke people think outside can 10/16 17:03
19F：→ leo1208:So we emphasize outside is also non-smoking 10/16 17:04
20F：→ leo1208:Ha ha, my poor english 10/16 17:09
21F：推 nkotb131:It's ok, we're all here to learn and improve. 10/17 09:10
22F：→ furball:2. Violators will be fined... 10/23 13:37
23F：→ furball:agree with Sma1lami, 3. Thank you for supporting our 10/23 13:43
24F：→ furball:smoke-free environment. 10/23 13:44