作者habiba (Amen)
看板Translation
標題[中英]催款書信求建議
時間Fri Jan 17 07:17:28 2014
請教一下版上大大
下面是一封催款的信
麻煩提供一些意見
謝謝建議~
1.長期以來,敝公司的獲利全部卡在貴公司的貸款上
Your loan payment squeeze our margin and surely cause impact on prospect
development for a long time.
: 2.過去敝公司每年有盈餘,資金也可以應付
In the past, profits and circulated funds can let us manage this situation
at ease.
3.但由於去年敝司虧損,貴公司又欠款高達300萬美金
: 若貴公司再不還款的話
: ,敝司將很難面對廠商的種種預付款要求了
: However, we were in deficits last year and the amount of your outstanding
debts
: is US$3,000,000
: If you still couldn't settling your accounts,
: we couldn't consent to your further prepayment request from us.
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1F：推 JinSha:第一句改成For a long time, our firm's margin has long 02/10 22:57
2F：→ JinSha:(去掉上面最後一個long) been hit by your loan payment. 02/10 23:02
3F：→ JinSha:後面surely...的部份好像沒對應原文，另外可改成, and this 02/10 23:04
4F：→ JinSha:has surely damaged our long-term development and 02/10 23:07
5F：→ JinSha:prospect. 02/10 23:07
6F：→ JinSha:第二句Previously, our firm achieve annual surplus for 02/10 23:10
7F：→ JinSha:(上面achieve改achieves) successive years and retains 02/10 23:12
8F：→ JinSha:sufficient funds for handling different situations. 02/10 23:13