作者TimManu (Silent Power)
看板poetry
標題Re: [創作] Jealousy
時間Wed May 26 14:26:47 2010
※ 引述《celestial09 (Koouos :D)》之銘言:
: I hate jealousy
: The killer of ture friendship
: I hate jealousy
: The opposite of beauty
: I hate jealousy
: The blocker of human progress
: hurting me deeply
: And I start to understand how hard it is
: to survive without jealousy
: while 99% of others possess it subtly
: Hide it under a smile
: in their ancient survival trait
: Beating others down subtly
: Shocked to realize that the other 1% exists even in me
: Loneliness mocking,
: friendship breaking,
: Redeemed as deviance
: Opposing jealousy lonesomely
: heart injured, soul wounded
: Fighting the black,
: the common human trait
: The world turns a bit grey as the morning breaks
: None the pure to be with
: This jealous semester leads to an endless journey
: And the child sits on the boat, paddling
: longing and longing,
: trying to make the surrouding friendly
: Desire of pureness unsatisfied, earnesty rejected,
: sobbing dismayfully.
: ps. A riminder of those people I met in new school when I was young.
Desire of pureness unsatisfied, earnesty rejected,
sobbing dismayfully.
為了這句我上下文再看了幾次,把自己想成在船上划著槳的小孩,只得到:
渴望著未滿足的純真,被否定的真誠以及憂傷的啜泣。
好矛盾的前後關係~~~也google不到什麼資料....XD
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1F:→ raphaella:原 po 應該正水深火熱吧,最好是誤啦 125.233.70.248 05/26 14:28
2F:推 celestial09:原PO是指Tim還是我阿 r大美女 XDD 123.193.24.253 05/26 15:21
3F:→ celestial09:to Tim: 當然google 不到 因為是我自 123.193.24.253 05/26 15:22
4F:→ celestial09:己亂寫的 XDD 123.193.24.253 05/26 15:22
5F:→ celestial09:好像只有最後那句寫得比較傳神 123.193.24.253 05/26 15:24
6F:→ celestial09:其他就是 口語啦 隨便糊出來的XDD 123.193.24.253 05/26 15:24
7F:→ TimManu:我以為這一系列都是 Langston Hughes...XD 118.168.204.68 05/26 15:46
8F:推 celestial09:Of course not.^^ I don't even know 123.193.24.253 05/26 15:51
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12F:推 celestial09:喔 妳的心很美阿 ^^ XDD 123.193.24.253 05/26 16:29
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