作者souffrance (souffrance)
看板poetry
標題[創作] The Astronomer
時間Tue Sep 14 22:03:14 2010
英詩版首po
在這裡潛水很久,知道大家都很有才華啊> < 也看到好多我好喜歡的作品
我只是一個理工科系隱身在宅宅堆裡的小小男人婆,
從小是說台語和阿美族話的,
15歲之前完全不知道什麼較助動詞,
現在上了大學,沒有修過什麼課也沒讀過什麼理論,
只是很喜歡讀詩,也想磨磨自己的筆,希望大家可以大力鞭,
剛開始寫只覺得筆很不順,一切都很工,
希望以後筆能越磨越利!!!!
I once knew an astronomer,
a perfect model of decency,
a curious drifter,
a window lightened up high in the tower
whose hometown’s a firefox icon of an island media
He knows a proper place to put unbridled craze
Continuing to hold onto his undimmed simplicity
Hitching his winged chariot to a distant star
He should not stay for a trodden ambition
His flight turned into blue gems under the scarlet sky
That shines the same an earth away
tears subside, and I know
there’s no way to be childish
is there another way to make it matter
another way to keep your breath
close behind my scruff
other than the only way it can be
I had to fight off outside thoughts,
other watching eyes
I took the blows, shrugged off the chains
In a way I thought he would apprize
Under the same scarlet sky
Toddling home amidst the dark
I know the starlight does not suffice
at the wasted corner of my silent reverie
is there another way to make it matter
another way to keep your breath
close behind my scruff
other than the only way it can be
The dim light that seeps through the dome
Makes me see what is not there
Must I remember, still inhaling his presence
He used to be here under the scarlet sky
He used to be here before daylight
He used to be here before daylight
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1F:推 celestial09:wonderful! :D Man, I love this one! 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:32
2F:→ celestial09:妳是誰呀? :D 認識一下 :P 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:33
3F:→ celestial09:寫得真好! 第一首嗎? 就寫得這麼好 :D 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:33
4F:→ celestial09:我也是小時候都說台語的喔 ^^ 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:34
5F:→ souffrance:哇好開心,過獎了,這首詩的故事有興趣 220.132.89.123 09/14 22:45
6F:→ souffrance:的人站內信給我吧,因為是自己的故事又 220.132.89.123 09/14 22:45
7F:→ souffrance:不太敢公開怕被發現XD天球大我回你信喔 220.132.89.123 09/14 22:46
8F:推 celestial09:天球大? XD 笑死我了 哈哈~ 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:49
9F:→ celestial09:最喜歡跟天文有關的詩了 ^^ 140.112.4.116 09/14 22:50
10F:推 spacedunce5:actually quite good! 61.228.86.84 09/15 00:50
11F:推 hahastarr:'tears subside'---i like that :) 60.234.28.98 09/15 09:29
12F:推 celestial09:推 a perfect model of decency! 140.112.4.115 09/15 10:29
13F:→ celestial09:推 his undimmed simplicity! :) 140.112.4.115 09/15 10:37
14F:→ celestial09:such a genuine man per se! :D 140.112.4.115 09/15 10:38
15F:→ souffrance:hi hahastarr,其實我最喜歡的是Ziva :P 220.132.89.123 09/15 10:44
16F:→ hahastarr:Tony Tony Tony Tony is the cutest lah 60.234.28.98 09/15 10:54
17F:→ hahastarr:=//= 60.234.28.98 09/15 10:55
18F:推 korn31910:Good indeed 59.115.84.47 09/16 07:39