作者gathering (帥哥不可靠)
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標題小小小作品..
時間Sun Apr 29 03:55:10 2001
In vague and misty vision,
Who is it that I see?
Sister dear, none shall ever you replace,
Yet why does another stand beside me?
Blink of eye,
It's you once more.
Sister dear,
I miss you.
~Vel
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寫的還不是很好
請各位多多指教~:)
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