這是去年的題目 印象題目是受過更多教育機會的人是否能得到更多機會 然後寫出例子之類 下面是我的作文 麻煩請鞭策我 如果可以的話可以順便跟我講說要加強那些文法概念 謝謝各位! Whether people receive higher education get more opportunities is a great issue in today's society. In my view, I don't think this theory is right and the followings are my reason. One reason is that people have their strengths and advantages, but not only in academic. People's academic achievement cannot represent their career path. The other reason is I know that many people who receive higher education cannot figure out what the job they want to do. As for me, I was not good at studying. After graduating from college, I didn't choose to enter a graduate school but did the job of the salesperson in a car dealer until now. In my company, I found that I have a talent to convince customers to buy expensive cars. After one year, I was promoted to a sales manager and received a lot of chances to go our branches company in American to learn more about management skills and take a series of training. I hope that one day I can have my own business, and I think my achievement will not be less than those whose degree is higher than me. --

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