这是去年的题目 印象题目是受过更多教育机会的人是否能得到更多机会 然後写出例子之类 下面是我的作文 麻烦请鞭策我 如果可以的话可以顺便跟我讲说要加强那些文法概念 谢谢各位! Whether people receive higher education get more opportunities is a great issue in today's society. In my view, I don't think this theory is right and the followings are my reason. One reason is that people have their strengths and advantages, but not only in academic. People's academic achievement cannot represent their career path. The other reason is I know that many people who receive higher education cannot figure out what the job they want to do. As for me, I was not good at studying. After graduating from college, I didn't choose to enter a graduate school but did the job of the salesperson in a car dealer until now. In my company, I found that I have a talent to convince customers to buy expensive cars. After one year, I was promoted to a sales manager and received a lot of chances to go our branches company in American to learn more about management skills and take a series of training. I hope that one day I can have my own business, and I think my achievement will not be less than those whose degree is higher than me. --

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