我不敢说自己英文多好 但我帮你稍微改了一下变这样 Dear Luke: Hi, I’m XXX (名子), who XXXXXX (提你们之前一起出去玩的事). Do you remember me? Sorry to bother you with this e-mail. I write this e-mail because I want to ask you, whether you’re interested in language exchange or not. After I come back to Taiwan, I need to take TOEFL (English Proficiency Test) again, therefore I would like an English native speaker to check my essays and offer me some suggestions on writing. In return for your help, I can teach you Chinese. If you agree to such plan, then I assure you that I can answer all your chinese questions at my best. We can discuss about further details later through e-mails. Thank you for taking time reading this e-mail. Best regards, XXX 我不是CCR，只是潜水版友，但以我微薄的英文知识来说，我知道信开头一开始就直呼对 方名子满没礼貌的。还有你提到你们并没有很熟，那开头应该先提一下之前的事，不然 对方有可能读信读了老半天还不知道你是谁。 另外虽然是写e-amil，信尾该有的祝福词还是最好写一下。 版上应该有很多英文强者，还请大家指教罗。 ※ 引述《eeniemenie (欸)》之铭言： : 大家好 其实我并不是CCR 但会看这个版 : 我现在在美国念暑期课程 发现文化差异有时是超出想像的 : 对方是出去玩过一次的朋友 并不是非常熟 : 所以想在送出信之前先问问是否有不恰当的地方 : 或是让美国人觉得不舒服、很怪什麽之类 : 觉得 美国CCR应该和美国人相处很多 会很了解 : 所以在这里发文 如果违反板规我先道歉>"<会自删 : 内容如下: : Luke! I want to make a deal with you. Language exchange!:-O : After I go back to Taiwan, I would need to take TOEFL(English proficiency : test!) again. Now my score is 101/120. Next time my score must exceed 110. I : need someone to check my essays and give me some suggestions on writing. : If I ask others for help, it feels like they help me but I have nothing to : give them. but if you help me I can teach you Chinese.:-D : I am pretty sure I can deal with all your Chinese questions also help with : your pronunciation and tell you how to use words appropriately. : If you like the deal we can discuss how it works later.;-) : 大概就这样 : 谢谢大家帮忙! --

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