作者MickeyXDDD (妙妙)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 麻烦帮我看一下我这回封信有没有错误
时间Sun Jun 25 23:57:28 2017
我美国秋季班申请的学校 写信给我说我选的课有两门无法选修
以下是他们的信件内容
Hello XXXX XXX(我的名子),
I am currently in the process of enrolling you into Fall courses. You
requested
PSY 310/310L
PSY 333
Unfortunately,Psy 333 is full and you do not seem to meet the pre-reqs for
PSY 310 according to your transcript. This course requires students to have
previously taken some sort of Experimental Psychology or Human Assessment
course where students learn the understanding of the science, ethics
application and social responsibilities of psychologists.
Have you taken a course that would cover that?
If not can you provide me with other courses you would be interested in
taking?
Thank you,
然後以下是我的回信
Thank you for your message.
I think I might be qualified for PSY310 since I have taken "Theory and
Practice of Psychological Research" last semester,
which is meanly about Experimental Psychology(Here is a link for the
textbook of that course:https://goo.gl/hMoR2G).
If you have any questions, you can ask the teacher of that program to confirm
it (Dr.XXX XXXX XXXX:[email protected])
If it still doesn't qualify, maybe I can take PSY 110 instead of PSY310
Besides that, If PSY333 is full, I think I can take MPA345 and MPA330 for
alternative (I filled they in course enrollment request form),
If the above solutions still do not work, I'm also interest in MPA310、MPA33
and PSY305.
以上回信内容的中文翻译大致如下:
谢谢您的来信,我认为PSY310那门课我是没有问题的,因为我有修过心理学研究法,
这门主要内容就是心理学实验法 (指定课本可参考此网址_____),有需要可以联络当
时开课的教授来确定(email: _______ )
如果还是不行,那就改成PHY110。
另外如果PSY333满了,可换成MPA345 and MPA330。但如果以上的解决方案还是不行,
MPA310、MPA33 amd PSY305这几门课我也有兴趣.
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以上回信的内容 想麻烦各位大大帮我看一下有没有文法上的问题
或是哪一句可以怎麽写会比较好 感激各位专业大大!!
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1F:→ cyndilin: 不少错误,但不影响理解,要去美国念书了,难道以後的每 06/26 01:36
2F:→ cyndilin: 一封都要给版友看过才寄出? 06/26 01:36
3F:→ lupinus: Meanly --> mainly,其他错误影响不大 06/26 02:10
4F:推 wohtp: 我觉得没啥「错」,只是不漂亮 06/26 23:13
5F:→ wohtp: 喔其实仔细看一遍是有些小错啦。以原po写得出这封信,我愿 06/26 23:16
6F:→ wohtp: 意相信错误只是typo。 06/26 23:16
7F:推 ChiehKuo: 有些Typo跟用太多if 还有if it still doesn't qualify 06/27 09:14
8F:→ ChiehKuo: 个人觉得很奇怪 06/27 09:14
9F:→ ChiehKuo: 但不影响理解! 06/27 09:26
10F:推 ChiehKuo: Typo像是I大说的 跟 confirm "space" it, I filled "the 06/27 09:30
11F:→ ChiehKuo: y "interest"ed" 06/27 09:30
12F:→ ChiehKuo: 这是我能找到的 06/27 09:30
13F:→ ChiehKuo: 其他要麻烦帮忙补充 06/27 09:30
14F:→ ChiehKuo: in course...form 也少定冠词 (应该是叫定冠词啦) 06/27 10:29