作者sean72 (.)
看板Eng-Class
标题[文法] help 用法
时间Tue Feb 13 13:50:25 2018
It is a great sense of achievement knowing your product creates solution for
people to help them making better choices.
to help them making better choices
or
to help them make better choices
又请问
这句话是否有点绕口，或是可以怎麽修改?
谢谢
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1F：推 EVASUKA: 觉得your solution helps them make better choices即可 02/13 13:54
2F：推 EVASUKA: 比较简洁(如果你不要拗口)，product本身就是一种solution 02/13 13:57
3F：推 cyndilin: for people to help them... 很罗唆，又没指定特地群， 02/13 14:05
4F：→ cyndilin: 直接 help people 就好 02/13 14:05
5F：→ cyndilin: a great sense of achievement 用这这里，有点不伦不类 02/13 14:16
6F：→ cyndilin: 的，了解你的产品，成就达成？！如果是了解一个可以获得 02/13 14:16
7F：→ cyndilin: 诺贝尔奖的产品，也许我会有满满的成就感 XD 02/13 14:16
8F：→ tulian: It is a great achievement that your product helps 02/13 16:20
9F：→ tulian: people make better choices 02/13 16:20
10F：推 gentianpan: 推tulian 的。英文较直接讲成就。很多英翻中常为了顺 06/23 11:30
11F：→ gentianpan: 口把achievement翻成成就感，用逻辑直翻反译回来英文 06/23 11:30
12F：→ gentianpan: 就怪。 06/23 11:30