作者koizumisyou (不小的挑战)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 回信给厂商，请帮我看看有无错误
时间Wed Jul 18 18:22:45 2018
Thank you for your replying
感谢您的回覆
I have been looking for this machine for ages
我找这台机器找很久了
and for now you are the only supplier which may have
而且目前你们是唯一可能有这台机器的供应商
I do hope there will be good news
我非常希望有好消息
CPU 80HZ or 66HZ would be acceptable as long as it's Type7011 model 250
CPU 80或66HZ都可以，只要是 Type7011 model 250
By the way do you provide service for delivery to Taiwan?
对了你们有提供送货到台湾的服务吗?
I am looking forward to your reply
期待您的回信
Best regards
Peter
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1F：推 kasimtojenny: 都没打句点XDDD看了小别扭哈哈 07/18 18:32
2F：→ koizumisyou: OK，除了句点有无不通顺的地方可以帮忙吗? 07/18 19:38
3F：→ deerwings: 234句其实可以省略(只是客套话而已) 07/18 20:04
4F：→ koizumisyou: 谢谢 07/18 20:31
5F：→ naushtogo: Thank you for your reply. 07/18 22:03
6F：→ naushtogo: shipping to Taiwan 07/18 22:04
7F：→ koizumisyou: 感谢指正 07/18 22:12
8F：推 angelofdeath: 我有疑问 为什麽你开头是用your replying 後面却用 07/18 23:39
9F：→ angelofdeath: your reply XDDD 07/18 23:39
10F：→ ggirls: have 是及物？ 07/19 00:28
11F：推 stedy: 我是对方看到第三句我会提高我的报价 07/19 10:34
12F：推 cphe: 2 3 4都可以省下来，有讲没讲其实没差，厂商要赚钱的，你是 07/19 16:08
13F：→ cphe: 客户不需要如此客气 07/19 16:08
14F：→ cphe: 期待回信也不用写...求职信才会这样写... 07/19 16:09
15F：→ koizumisyou: 感谢各位先进指教 07/23 21:10