作者istee (istee)
看板Eng-Class
标题[请益] 请问英文自我介绍
时间Wed Aug 14 13:43:46 2019
各位版大好：
由於小妹最近刚硕士毕业，需要找工作，想找有关科技业外商的工作，因此需要英文自传，但不确定自己写的好不好，已经有利用google, netspeak等网页查看有无错误的部分，希望各位大大能给些意见，谢谢大家。
My name is I-Ju Wang, and I was born in 1993. I graduated from Chiao Tung University where I majored in Material Science in master degree.
There are four members of my family. My father is a store owner, so I need to interact with people when I was young. It lets me become a social person. My mother is an accountant in the travel agency and is also my role model. I learned from her that if I worked hard, I won't regret anything. And I have a younger brother, we can give each other advice when we're going through hard times.
In college, I took part in many public benefit activities; For example, I joined beach cleaning and mountain cleaning activities. It not only keeps our environment clean but also makes me feel good. To cultivate a sense of responsibility, I volunteered to be a class leader and a badminton vice captain. With these experiences, I became more energetic and was able to work under pressure.
After I graduated from college, I worked at the National Synchrotron Radiation Research Center for one year. During this time, I can conduct beamline experiments, design experiments and solve problems by myself. These experiences sparked my interest in doing research, so I decided to study for a master's degree to improve my research ability.
During my Masters, my topic was "Tuning residual stress in highly (111)-oriented nanotwinned Cu". I learned a lot of skills such as electroplating, electropolishing, annealing, and carrying out high vacuum systems and vacuum cavity cleaning. At first none of my experiments working, I was under a lot of pressure. I tried to find the resolution of my experiment and worked around the clock. Fortunately, I found the method of solving the problems and was able to finish my thesis. Trouble shooting gave
me a sense of achievement and made me want to work in the tech industry.
In addition, I possess some experiences related to semiconductors. I participated in the semiconductor equipment course and realized how to operate the semiconductor equipment. I also experienced in electroplating wafers in a technology corporation. These experiences let me have the basic knowledge of semiconductors.
In order to enhance myself, I got many kinds of certificates like TQC-EXCEL 2010, C-level coach of badminton, 7th piano verification, technician for fixed crane operation, etc. I believe that I am a versatile person who can learn and adjust to anything. If I have a chance to work in your company, I would appreciate it so much and make an all-out effort.
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※ 编辑: istee (140.113.136.218 台湾), 08/14/2019 13:48:31
1F：→ hlin12: 你中文面试会说: 我出生XX年？我家里有X个人吗？ 08/14 17:36
2F：→ lesautres: 推楼上，其实大多数时候不是英文的问题 08/14 21:16
3F：→ bloedchen: 他也没说是面试时的讲稿，可能只是公司要求附上的文件 08/15 09:01
4F：→ hlin12: 重点不在是讲稿还是文件，而是在於讲出生几年，家里几个 08/15 11:39
5F：→ hlin12: 人，对於你应徵上有优势？ 08/15 11:39
6F：推 posen2012: 同意一楼…讲重点 经验 兴趣 目标 期望 整理好再翻英 08/15 13:03
了解，还以为那个家庭成员是必需，因为看网路上自传范本都有就跟着写了，谢谢大家的建议。
※ 编辑: istee (140.113.136.218 台湾), 08/15/2019 13:25:21
7F：→ posen2012: 就是尽可能在简短的介绍中让人了解自己的优点 大多主管 08/15 14:09
8F：→ posen2012: 都很忙 08/15 14:09
9F：推 discosoul: 阿滴英文有一篇不错啊 08/15 14:49
10F：推 cuylerLin: 主词也不要用太多I开头，一搜寻不得了发现有29个... 08/16 00:58
11F：→ cuylerLin: 没有细看，不过第二段讲家人可以整个砍掉，然後最後一 08/16 00:59
12F：→ cuylerLin: 段有许多感觉跟你应徵外商无关的经历都拿掉就是了... 08/16 01:00
13F：→ cuylerLin: 整体的话文法错误满多的...不过也许你先把架构清楚化 08/16 01:01
14F：→ cuylerLin: 起来再来修文法会是比较好的方式 08/16 01:02
15F：→ cuylerLin: 外商建议用CV or cover letter(不同国家不同称呼)架构 08/16 01:05
16F：→ cuylerLin: 来写会比一整篇要人家重头看到尾好得多，特别还要看流 08/16 01:05
17F：→ cuylerLin: 水帐与错误文法，举例：你讲硕论那段，就可以条列贡献 08/16 01:07
18F：→ cuylerLin: 与应徵公司的连结，也会更清楚，讲skills那边不需要丢 08/16 01:08
19F：→ cuylerLin: 一堆抽象名词，直接列举你做了什麽in layman's terms 08/16 01:10
20F：→ cuylerLin: 学会半导体器材那边也可以明确讲出学会了什麽型号功能 08/16 01:11
21F：→ cuylerLin: 这样会直接凸显你相较於其他人的优势，直接看出监别度 08/16 01:12
22F：→ cuylerLin: 大致上这样，没有太多时间就不一一细看了，祝工作顺利 08/16 01:13
好的，真的非常感谢您!!!
※ 编辑: istee (140.113.136.219 台湾), 08/19/2019 11:46:58