I think it is better this way " To my parents, Your supports make all the hardwork worthwhile. You are who make this dissertation happens so I would like to dedicate it to my parents and siblings. " ※ 引述《cementite (colony)》之铭言： : Hello everyone, : I finally graduate and get my degree. : I want to write three sentences to my parents. : As followed, : "To my parents, : who supporting and making it all worthwhile. : You are the ones that make this dissertation happen. : Dedicate to my father, mother, brother and sister." : Are the sentences properly and correct? : Thank you so much. --

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