作者kameaki5566 (龟明56)
看板EngTalk
标题[Ask ] Could you help me to check my article?
时间Thu Dec 27 20:09:03 2012
I wrote a cover letter for aplying for a job, but I am not sure
if all the grammar are correct.
Could you help me to check it?
Dear Ms. Jill XXX
I am highly interested in a position of HR assistant advertised in XXX. I
have enclosed my resume with this letter which will emphasize my knowledge to
perform this job efficiently.
My skills and qualifications are in line with the demands stated in your job
description. For instance, I am extremely good at doing integration,
maintaining documents and making arrangements which I deem are the most
significant functions of an assistant. When I was a student, I always held
activities. Planning and execution are not a big deal to me.
Furthermore, I worked in a chain restaurant for almost two years, so I
believe that I have a good ability to deal with my own emotions and service
customers. I take pride in my capability to anticipate what a customer wants
before he or she verbalizes it. Besides, I learned how to assist on
administration from the job. I have a bachelor’s degree in psychology.
During this period of time, I was a volunteer in a children's home. I am sure
that I am willing to help people.
I can be reached at the 0986XXXXXX or
[email protected]. Thank you for your
reading my cover letter and consideration. I look forward to having an
interview with you.
Sincerely,
kameaki5566
Enc.Resume
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1F:推 majaja:extremely good可以改成have lots experiences on 或其他 12/28 03:40
2F:→ majaja:形容词 12/28 03:40
3F:推 majaja:integration太笼统...建议在用个名词休饰,什麽的integrati 12/28 03:41
4F:→ majaja:on 12/28 03:41
5F:推 majaja:拿去给人改比较快ˇˇ 太多地方不通 12/28 03:44