作者chasethesky (坚持!)
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标题[心得] 模版分享
时间Wed Nov 12 20:27:13 2008
以下是我自己整理的模版(整理自莫老师的讲义)
我称它为AWA无敌模版XD
这次考AT作文前前後後加起来大概只准备了一天
主要就是把模版背得滚瓜烂熟
程度再烂都有东西可以写
我的策略就是,弃issue保argue
issue就是靠实力尽量写,argue就是考前把机经的题目用模版的论点想一想
我的分数是4.0
本身程度并不好
以上是我的背景给大家参考看看
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开头
In this ___, the author concludes that ___.
Furthermore, the author claims that ___.
However, I don’t think the argument is logically convincing because some of the assumptions on which its conclusion rests are highly questionable.
另有他因
First of all, the author makes a logical connection between __ and __, but he does not supply enough information to support its generalization.
___ are affected by several factors such as ___, ___, and ___.
Each of these factors could contribute to the ___ problem of ___.
Without further consideration of the other possible causes of ___, the proposed solution is, at best an incomplete, hasty solution and at worst, an incorrect decision.
It is uncertain that ___ can solve its ___ problem only with ___, and the proposal needs more research and analysis, taking into consideration the other factors.
另有他因~以时间先後做为因果关系的错误
First of all, the post hoc fallacy makes the argument invalid.
The author of the ___ assumes that because one event follows another in time, the first event caused the second. In other words, he mistakes a temporal connection for a causal connection.
That ___ after ___ may be a matter of coincidence, not cause and effect.
That is, there is no proof of a direct-cause relationship between ___ and ___.
Many other factors such as ___, ___, and ___ could cause the same result.
To reduce all factors ___ to one single cause is an oversimplification.
错误套用
In addition, even if ___ are/is the result(s) of ___, It does not mean that ___ will get better results than ___.
For one thing, ___.
For another thing, ___.
Finally, not all ___ are alike.
Some ___ may not to worry about ___.
Even if other ___ have the same serious problems as ___, what works for X will not necessary work for Y.
The reason is that not all ___ have identical conditions nor solutions (to the problems).
I wonder whether the comparison of two things suggests that they are similar when they are, in fact, distinctly not different.
Therefore, the other problem with the argument is that the example is asserted to apply to all cases rather than a select few.
引用的数据来路不明
Moreover, the credibility of the phrase” studies suggest” is in doubt because the ___ fails to show enough information on the sources of the studies. If people do not trust the validity of the studies, the suggestion offered by those studies will be meaningless. On the contrary, if the studies were conducted by a reliable institution such as Gallup, the argument would be more convincing.
结论
In conclusion, the author is trying to pass his speculative theory off as incontrovertible fact. On the contrast, the argument is unwarranted because it rests on the unsound premise and overlooks certain considerations.
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