※ 引述《sjvious (LoveIsSweetMisery)》之铭言： : 有错还请推文告知，小弟会立刻修改。 帮修正一些语意颇为诡异的地方 : At least there are some new faces. Along with Gallardo, the top of the : rotation will include free-agent lefties Randy Wolf and Doug Davis. Between : them, CHONE predicts that the Crew will get about 330 innings of sub-4.50 : pitching. Compared to replacement level, Wolf was a bit pricey. Compared to : the disaster that was 2009 Brewers starting pitching, Wolf is a savior. : 至少有三位是新面孔。除了 Gallardo 前段轮值还包含了FA签来的 Randy Wolf 以及 : Doug Davis。CHONE 预测他们两个大概能有330局的工作量且 ERA 低於 4.50。以市场 : 价格来说 Wolf 确实有一点点贵，但对於去年残破的轮值，Wolf 显然是一位酒鬼救星。 replacement level还是直译出来较好 用"市场价值"去替代有点不妥 : Then there's Jeff Suppan. In a logical world, the Brewers would cut him : loose, suffer the emotional pain of a $12 million sunk cost, and give his : innings to someone—anyone—else. In this world, he may well end up with a : rotation spot. He will give up a lot of runs. : 再来是 Jeff Suppan，逻辑上来说酒鬼应该买断他12M的肥约，甚至卖给其他潘那 : 但现实的结果是，他是球队的第五号先发，且会设法减少他自己的失分。(??) 应该说： 如果酒鬼理智的话应该会想乾脆丢掉Suppan，宁愿承受那丢到水里的12M然後把他的局数 通通丢给随便哪个人吃都好。 但是回归现实，他大概仍会是轮值的一份子，然後继续丢一堆分数... : Even if Suppan sticks in the rotation for most of the season, this is a : much-improved rotation. It doesn't look like a playoff-caliber one, but if : Parra (still only 27) puts things together and rebounds to something like his : 2008 season, it might be good enough to get the job done. : 假使说 Suppan 罩得住的话，这轮值已经比去年进步很多了。虽然看起来不像能打进 : 季後赛的轮值，但如果才27岁的 Parra 能再度投出08年的好成绩，看起来还有点搞头。 你误会stick这个字了 这里stick in是"待在"的意思(有点negative的fu就是了) 所以应该是翻成：就算Suppan整季大部分时间都该死地待在先发，这仍会是个进步得多的 轮值。 : Officially, the Brewers aren't expecting much from the pair, but if both : perform at the lower end of their offensive projections, it's easy to see an : anemic overall offense result. For all that Ryan Braun and Prince Fielder can : do, another down year from Corey Hart, a step back from Casey McGehee, and a : couple of all-field youngsters could guarantee some awfully easy innings for : opposing pitchers. : 据传，酒鬼对於两只新秀并没有太高的期望，如果他们不能展现出进攻能力，那打线 : 看起来会相当贫弱。除了 Braun 跟 Fielder 外，在生涯低点的 Corey Hart 和退步 : 的 Casey McGehee 及两只年轻新秀，可以让对手投起来很轻松。 第一句中间那句直译成"如果他们的打击都只能达到预测数据的下标..."会好一点 : Those annoyed by the constant low-level chatter about a long-term deal for : Prince Fielder had better brace themselves. It ain't going away anytime soon. : 这句不太会。 那些一直以来被有关小王子签长约问题的低级讨论弄得不爽的人，最好已经有心理准备了 。因为这些传闻至少这一阵子都不会消失。 : A quick recap. Prince is now in his second season of arbitration. Last year, : he signed a two-year deal that gave the club some cost certainty; this year, : he's making $10.5 million. If Scott Boras and the Brewers settle on a : one-year contract next year, we could be looking at something in Ryan Howard : territory, pushing $20 million. : 快速回顾：小王子正在薪资仲裁的第二年，去年他签了2年约无疑给了酒鬼很大的支出 : 今年10.5M。如果 Bora$ 跟酒鬼谈好明年签一年约的话，猴儿的20M是对照组。 原文里的some应该没有"很大"的意思，这样前後文看起来有点怪怪的 : It's conceivable that Milwaukee would do that. Between the low-cost Ryan : Braun deal and Suppan's contract coming off the books, the money will be : available. It's even possible that the Brewers could convince themselves that : Fielder is worth a $150 million, seven-year megadeal. : 是可以想像酒鬼高层会这麽做的。在 Braun 的佛心约和 Suppan 的肥约之间，酒鬼应该 : 还负担得起。酒鬼甚至肖想7年150M绑住小王子是可行的。(哈哈哈---) 最後一句应该没有你翻的那个意思，前面提到比照Howard的20M价码，签个一年20M的约 对酒鬼是没有问题的，但是7y/150M就有点风险了(毕竟是7年平均高达22M...) "甚至有可能酒鬼相信小王子是值得7y/150M这样的超级大约的"←最後一句这样翻就好了 : But this seems unlikely. First of all, Boras will want Fielder to test the : rose-tinted waters of free agency. That probably rules out a long-term deal : next winter. Second, while Fielder has shown some improvement at first base : (-23 in 2006-07 to -7 in 2008-09, according to TotalZone), he's still a : designated hitter in the not-too-distant future. The Brewers don't need one : of those. : 不过这似乎不太可能。首先，Bora$ 会希望小王子先到FA试试水温。这或许排除了签长约 : 的可能。其次，虽然小王子一垒的守备年年在进步，但不久的将来他也许会变打DH(??) : 酒鬼一点都不想看到这些结果。 考虑他的体型，不久的将来会改打DH是possible的，你是对的。 : The Milwaukee front office isn't stupid. The odds that Fielder is wearing a : Cerveceros uniform in 2012 are awfully low. Fielder can net a whole lot more : than draft picks, and especially if the 2011 squad is shaping up to be : another 80-win mediocrity, there's no reason to pay Fielder $20 million to be : there. He might be part of a playoff run in 2010 or 2011, but it remains to : be seen whether it's the Brewers he'll be leading into October. : 酒鬼高层不是白痴。小王子在2012年穿Cerveceros制服的机率相当低。(??) : 小王子比一大堆选秀全都还值钱，尤其是假使2011年的队型还有可能拿下80胜的话 : 绝对没有理由给只给他1年20M。10年或11年他可能会是季後赛的一份子，但仍有待 : 观察他是不是那个带领酒鬼前进10月的人。 Cerveceros是酿酒人的西班牙文，酒鬼在特殊的日子会改穿上胸前绣着这个字的球衣。 然後这後半段我想你是翻错了，原文应该是说：如果2011这支队伍仍然是只80胜左右的 队伍(换句话说，根本没进步XD)，那麽根本没有必要在小王子身上花上20M这笔钱。 最後一句则是说：或许小王子的身影还是会在往後两个球季的季後赛中出现，但是到底 他所带领的球队会不会还是酒鬼就只能让人拭目以待了。 如果我也有对原文理解错误的地方也欢迎指正喔:) --

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