作者CLOSED (士东市场生鱼片好好吃~~)
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标题Re: [请益] 请问这样的CV可以吗
时间Thu Nov 26 01:50:33 2009
终於看到正式的英文履历格式
几个地方注意一下 交流交流
为方便比对我直接在原文底下注记
我是根据HBS的标准CV格式来给建议
记得维持在一页版面就好
1.格式上可以这样编排
time background Location
把时间轴放在最左端可以让人比较清楚知道经历
藏在本文中不太清楚
※ 引述《moonjala (结了)》之铭言:
: xxxxxxxxxxxx
: xxx@xxxxx
: +886-xxx-671-731 or +886-2-xxxx-4150
: Education
: CUNY, Baruch College, Zicklin Business School, Taipei branch, Executive
: Master of Science in Finance, will graduate of 2010.
: National Taiwan University, Economics major, Class of 2006
台大的学历要加上 bachelor, xxx department
什麽学校什麽系拿学士 什麽学校什麽所拿硕士
这种东西是一翻两瞪眼的东西 要写清楚
: PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCES
: Yuanta Securities, Brokerage Department
: Sales Representative, 05/2009~now
: Delivering TAI-Stock, HK-Stock and US-Stock information for clients.
: Be consultant as iShares ETF, global ETF, and mutual funds.
: Maintain more than 0.003% market share, include institutes and individuals.
: ELN, CLN and REPO broker
所有句首动词型态一率用过去式
除了一般性的叙述外, 请把competence写出来,
业绩能加上数字最好
我随手举个例子
Account Development and Customer relationship Management:
Developed 20+ accounts and maintained 50+ accounts,
AUM up to 5 million USD
当然 这要看你工作内容而定
如果就你字面上的意思来看
delivering xxx information for (or to?) clients
我会直觉是快递的工作
我这样比喻可能不太恰当 但是原po应该明白我的意思
抓大重点~太琐碎的东西就不用写了
之後的工作经验描述也要注意这点
: Manulife Insurance Co.
: Financial Planner. 06/2008~04/2009
: Using investment policy to design wealth transfer plan for family.
: Using regulation benefit to design enterprise to stay just plan.
: Gathering different financial tools to make retirement plan.
: Expanding policies to create property preservation plan.
一样 句首动词全改为过去式
有些东西最好用专有名词 例如wealth management
这样一说人家都知道你在说什麽 不然会有拉里拉杂的感觉
: First Financial Holding-Offshore funds Dep.
: Assistant Manager, 11/20007~04/2008
: Supervisor: Danny Wen, Vice President
: Cooperate with Northern Trust invest plan.
: Promote Manager of Mangers funds in Taiwan.
: Writing news for Northern Trust products and daily, weekly main financial
: markets reports.
: Negotiator for controlling budget and PR face to media.
句首动词全改为过去式
: INTERNSHIP EXPEERIENCES
: American Chamber of Commerce in Taipei, Taiwan
: Project Assistant, 01/2005-03/2006
: Supervisor: Dr. Richard R. Vuylsteke, C.E.O.
: Achieved the best advertising sales record, 115 companies, for AmCham’s
bingo! 这一段就很棒!
句法对 也有数字佐证
: Membership Directory.(07/2005~09/2005)
: Participated in AmCham’s signature events, including HNF(政府谢年饭),
: White Paper, and World’s Best Advertisement
.
: Taiwan Tonichi Risk Management Co., Taipei, Taiwan
: Summer Intern, 07-08/2003
: Supervisor: Yu-Chang Lin, President
: Performed technical analysis on Taiwan’s industrial and financial market
: Issued daily, weekly, and monthly reports with respect to TAIEX activities
: HONORS
: Exceptional Talented Student in Biology, Academia Sinica
: Taipei, Taiwan, 10/1998
: L’Oreal Global Business Game Ranked NO.3 in Taiwan
: Taipei, Taiwan 03/2005
: PUBLICATIONS
: ,2008,How to see through fake offshore police. P.66~68 Money+
: 11th 2008
: , 2006: New Derivatives and Taiwan’s Nasty Elections: Prospects
: of Neuroscience, Politics and Finance. In Preparation.
: . 2003: RMB Revaluation and Taiwan’s Industry: Effect and
: Options. Tonich Monthly Report, Sep.,
: SPECIAL MEMBERSHIP
: American Chamber of Commerce in Taipei-Young Professional of Asset Management
: Member
: LICENSES
: Senior Securities Specialist
: Investment-oriented insurance representative
: FAMILY MEMBERS RELATED JOB
: BROTHER
: Senior Officer
: Taipei Economic and Culture Representative Office (2001~)
: BROTHER Ph. D in Environment Computer Science, JHU
: Part-Time work in NASA, IBM Super computer center (20
後面有些乱 可能没贴全吧..
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