作者matchacat (抹茶很好吃)
看板Salary
标题[请益] 请各位帮我看英文自介
时间Sun Mar 11 02:13:05 2012
烦请各位帮我看一下英文自介
大概是两分钟的基本介绍
可能写的非常不好,许多文法和单字都不清楚使用的是否得当
麻烦各位帮我看一下
非常感谢各位指教,谢谢
My name is XXX.I graduated from XXX university and my major was Russian .
In college period,I was a once the cheif of document and file in student
association of our department.In charge to categorize documents and publish
department's periodical.In addition,I have joined in the department's
contestsand performance.In my learning,I received semester scholarship from
university.
Because my parents have to run a restaurant,when I was in the university,
I was part time job in my family's business.I had to do waitress,accounting
assistant,that I learned the basic accounting affirs , how to communicate
with people and know organization ethics.
My perfessional job experience is necessarily limited,but I am sure that I
will be earnset in my work and be actively solve problems.
The above is my self-introduction. I wish to be granted an opportunity to
join yours. Thank you.
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※ 编辑: matchacat 来自: 123.192.180.161 (03/11 02:33)
1F:→ ascomp0929:看不懂,错字连篇,文法也很怪 通篇几乎都是III 03/11 03:36
2F:→ justbejoni:同意楼上..请重新检视文法 03/11 09:58
3F:→ matchacat:谢谢你们的建议,我会在重新修改:) 03/11 10:31
4F:推 FCUsquanto:I 服 U 03/11 11:46
5F:推 ascomp0929:要速成就买英文自传范例的书,拿来套用 03/11 13:34
6F:→ ohnedich:突然想到之前我花了好几千块请专业的帮忙改 结果改完我还 03/11 14:41
7F:→ ohnedich:没把升级版的自介贴到104上 就都录取了 整个白忙一场@@ 03/11 14:41
8F:→ sc1:政大俄语系? 哇咧没问题 03/11 17:57
9F:→ sc1:完全OK。准备去上班吧 03/11 17:58