作者Shaq32 (.....)
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标题Re: [请益] 请各位帮我看英文自介
时间Sun Mar 11 04:21:45 2012
※ 引述《matchacat (抹茶很好吃)》之铭言:
: 烦请各位帮我看一下英文自介
: 大概是两分钟的基本介绍
: 可能写的非常不好,许多文法和单字都不清楚使用的是否得当
: 麻烦各位帮我看一下
: 非常感谢各位指教,谢谢
:
我假设你是要用说的表达
My name is XXX.I majored in Russian at XXX University.
: Back in college I was (the cheif of document and file in student
: association of our department)系学会文书?用法你再查查.
In charge of categorizing documents and editing periodical of the department.
I have also joined the department's contestsand(没看过这单字)
performance.
I got scholarship from the University.(奖学金部分要补充讲清楚一点 我想对方会
有兴趣, 然後找一个"正确"的位子安插到自我介绍里)
I would especially like to draw your attention to my Xmonth part-time
experience in my family's business(restaurant) as a waitress and
accounting assistant. Through this experience I have learned
basic accounting skills, organization ethics and how to communicate with
people fluently. I am pretty confident that I can build and maintain
productive relationships with clients and colleagues at your company.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
简单改是这样 看最後一段能不能多加一些支持的例子证明你有
high level of communication, interpersonal and interpretive skills.
如果能找俄文相关我想自我介绍可以放重在俄文
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1F:→ matchacat:谢谢你,我会在重新修正 :) 03/11 09:53
2F:推 JarvisDamon:介绍内容尽量跟应徵职位做连结,业务<->积极外向有想法 03/11 10:42
3F:→ sc1:你直接帮他改好就好了嘛! 03/11 17:58