我是应届毕业生 第一次写求职英文自传， 我的英文写作能力大学4年退步很多阿!(跪) 我要投的公司是台湾公司，需要 短篇的英文自传 我有参考前辈们的文章，但还是有要改进的部分 希望板上的高手能帮我看看有哪里需要改进的.. 非常感谢!!!! m(_ _ )m 应徵工作是财务方面的 I am XXXX studies banking and finance, graduated from Tamkang University this year. {About my personality traits} I’m easygoing, open-minded and optimistic but easily move to tears. I have high ability to adapt to the environment that can familiarize myself into work rapidly {About my Work Experience} My family didn’t cover all my expenses so I found a part-time job after school. Over three years of work experience in Tamkang University and I also have an experience working as a customer service representative in the Fubon Bank. Both jobs required me to speak to customers via telephone. Opposing to the ordinaty stereotype that the customer serivice is a boring job, I've actually quite enjoyed in the position because it gave me an opportunity to improve my telephone etiquette, my problem solving capability, and my self-esteem.My direct supervisors say that I’m very cautious, dependable and efficient because I frequently find the error on the document. 在学校工读3年也有在银行工作 "Over 3 .......in the Fubon bank" 这里我一直觉得哪里怪，但不知道要怎麽写才会比较好.. {About my extracurricular activities} My volunteer involvement with Mackay Memorial Hospital's Children volunteers club provided great opportunities for me to get work experiences, to meet people, to learn new s kills, and best of all, to help childern who are less fortunate than I am. 请问有人知道儿童志工的英文怎麽写吗??? Given an opportunity to work in XXX公司, I would do my best to prove my capability. 请大家指教 非常感谢!!!! --

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