作者tengharold (RoadMan_A)
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标题[中英] 以前译过的两段诗
时间Sun Oct 3 01:52:40 2010
这两段来自红楼，是老师给的功课 XD
1) 神秀:
身是菩提树，心如明镜台，时时勤拂拭，莫使有尘埃．
Body the bodhi tree, heart the spotless mirror;
Timely cleaned, flawlessly kept.
[Clean timely, keep pristine.] inspired by usread
2) 慧能:
菩提本非树，明镜亦非台，本来无一物，何处染尘埃？
The bodhi is no tree, the reflection is no mirror;
nothing there, never flawed.
[Nil is there, whence the flaw?] inspired by all :)
老师功课打A啦，但是慧能那几句我一直认为不够好...
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I let the melody shine, let it cleanse my mind, I feel free now
But the airways are clean and there's nobody singing to me now
-Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve
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1F：推 lifegetter:frequently dusted, dustlessly kept （丢砖块） 10/03 02:01
2F：推 lifegetter:body the bodhi tree, heart the mirror set （好台） 10/03 02:06
3F：推 lifegetter:The bodhi is not a tree, the mirror is no set 10/03 02:08
4F：推 lifegetter:There is nothing there, what need is to dust? 10/03 02:14
5F：→ usread:but 神秀偈 is put in the imperative mood 10/03 02:32
6F：→ tengharold:因为是禅宗的，所以我翻时尽量简短 ~ 10/03 02:44
7F：→ tengharold:要imperative mood -> Clean timely, keep flawlessly 10/03 02:45
8F：→ tengharold:mirror set 会不会像"一组镜子"? 10/03 02:47
9F：→ usread:The body a bo tree, the mind a mirror, 10/03 02:53
10F：→ usread:Dust it often, spare it the dirt. 10/03 03:04
11F：→ usread:so spare it the dirt. 10/03 03:05
12F：推 usread:the mind a mirror stand 10/03 03:11
13F：→ usread:The bodhi's no tree; the mirror's no stand; 10/03 03:12
14F：→ usread:Nil to begin with, where's the dirt to dust? 10/03 03:16
15F：→ usread:大尘小埃落镜台 10/03 03:18
16F：推 lifegetter:哈哈，被我的砖块引出来了 XD 10/03 09:27
17F：推 hansmtom:是玄浆大学的吗为什麽要翻佛经呢？？ 10/03 10:01
18F：→ tengharold:i like "nil" 10/03 17:13
※ 编辑: tengharold 来自: 72.207.38.147 (10/03 17:22)
19F：→ tengharold:remember that poem 2 is a continuation of poem 1 10/03 17:25
※ 编辑: tengharold 来自: 72.207.38.147 (10/03 18:20)
20F：推 lifegetter:对，所以要两偈一起翻，前後呼应 XD 10/03 19:22