※ 引述《neile (neile)》之铭言： : 烦请各位高手帮我看一下 : 英文的字句是否有文法或字汇使用上的错误 : 要给小六的孩子演戏用的，请大家帮忙!thanks a lot! 好玩好玩~ : Pig Guy has been defeated by Monkey King : Tangseng and his apprentice, Monkey King, are : going to the west to Seek the sutra. On the way seek : to the west, they stop by a village. In the village, West (把"西"当作一个终点) : there is a spirit there. He forced a beautiful girl : to marry him. The girl's family are worried. And they is , and asked : asked Monkey King for help. Monkey King got an idea. the Monkey King The Monkey King has an idea. : He wants to pretend to be the beautiful girl and tricks He will pretend (下面才要开始，所以我用未来式)... and trick : the spirit. And now, the spirit is coming. : 这时起了风声，悟空便不慌不忙地也躲在了门後。 : 猪八戒大笑着耀武扬威地走上场来，嘴里大喊：小娘子，我来了。 : 八戒：Darling, here I am. : 站在台上停一下，见没有动静，觉得奇怪，往房屋里看去，见露出一段红袖子， : 高兴地一拍手掌。八戒：小娘子还害羞呢，不敢出来见老猪吗？来，来，来，我们 : 就要是夫妻了，还害什麽羞呀！。 : 八戒：Darling, don't be so shy! Please come to me. Come on, we will be : a couple. a couple soon. : 猪八戒跑上去轻轻拉住红袖子，把小娘子拖了出来，小娘子作出害羞的样子，有时 : 又做出猴子的模样。 : 八戒：小娘子，不用怕，我虽然长得丑，但本领高强，一定会让你过上好日子的。 : 八戒：Although I am ugly, I am so powerful. I am sure that I can make you also really powerful. : happy. : 小娘子笑着点头，抓耳挠腮。 : 八戒：小娘子，你高兴的时候干嘛要像猴子一样？ : 八戒：Darling, why do you look like a monkey ? act (look是长相、act是行为) : 小娘子：我一高兴就觉得痒，所以就抓一抓。 : 小娘子：When I am happy, I always tickle. scratch. (tickle是搔痒) : 八戒：高兴就好，高兴就好。我们快入洞房吧。 : Fine, let's go to the bedroom. : 八戒拉住小娘子就往房子里面钻。小娘子作出动脑筋的样子，又把八戒拉回来。 : 八戒：哇，小娘子，你好大的力气啊，干嘛把我拉出来啊？ : 八戒：Darling. Why are you so powerful? , you're so strong. Why did you drag me back out? : 小娘子：夫君，你这模样进去会吓着我的父母的，还是去你家里吧。 : Honey, your appearance will frighten my parents. We'd better go to your home. : 八戒：去我家？那太好了，我们这就走吧。 : Go to my house？OK. that's a great idea. Let's go. : 两人走了几步，小女子做出腿疼摔了一下的样子，八戒忙扶起她，作出痛惜的样子。 : 小女子：我一个弱女子，哪里能走这麽远？夫君背我吧。 : I cannot walk any further. Can you carry me on your back? : 八戒：背你？好，好，好。谁让你是我的媳妇呢？ : Carry you on my back? All right. You're my wife after all. Come on. : 八戒把小女子背上：娘子，我们这就出发了。 : Darling, Let's go. : 八戒摔倒。八戒在台上走一圈，做出越走越慢，越走越累的样子。小女子在他背 : 上抓耳挠腮，非常高兴。 : 八戒：小娘子，你怎麽这麽重啊？ : Darling, why are you so heavy? : 小女子：不是我重，只怕是你不想背我吧？ : Do you think so? Don't you want to carry me? : 八戒：不,不,不，我背，我背。 : Yes, I do. I do. : 继续艰难地走。小女子得意地在背上笑。八戒体力不支，一跤摔倒，小女子倒地之 : 後，灵活地越上台上的假山，先做出猴子笑看八戒的样子，再做出摔疼了的样子在 : 那里呻吟。八戒听到女子的呻吟，忙东张西望找小媳妇。 : 八戒：娘子，摔着了没有？娘子，摔着了没有？娘子，你摔到哪去了？怎麽看不见你了？ : Darling, are you OK? Darling, where are you? Why can't I see you? : 小女子（偷偷地笑，再装作痛苦的样子）：夫君，我在这里呢。 : Honey, I am here. : 小女子：看你这麽辛苦，我也摔疼了，那就休息休息吧。 : You look so tired, and I feel sore. Let's rest. : 八戒：太好了。 我们就休息一下吧！ : That's a good idea. Let's rest. : 八戒听了高兴地坐在下面休息，小女子仔细地打量他。 : 小女子（撒娇地）：夫君，你是哪里的神仙，我都还不知道，怎麽能嫁给你呢？ : 你可要告诉我。 : Honey, how can I marry you? I don't even know where you are from. You must : tell me the truth first. tell me about you first. : 八戒：唉，别提了，想当年我本是天上的天篷元帅，上天入地，八面威风。 : 只因冒犯了嫦娥，被玉帝贬下凡尘，错投了猪胎，长成这般模样。 : Alas! Don't mention it! I was Tianpeng marshal, I could fly between heaven : and the It's a long story. (Don't mention it 太字面) I was once a marshal in Heaven, and I : world. Only because I made a big mistake, I was punished by Yudi. So I : became a pig. But I did something wrong and was punished : That's why I am so ugly. : 小女子：你说自己是天上的神仙，怎麽连我都背不动，真让人难以相信。 : You said that you were an immortal in the heaven. Why can't you carry me? : It's impossible! say in heaven, but you can't even carry me. : 八戒：我真的是天上的神仙，你干嘛不信呢你。 : I am really the immortal. Why don't you believe me? an immortal. : 小女子：那你拿出点本事来瞧瞧。 : Show me some gongfu then. : 八戒：好，让我露两手来给你看看。 : OK, let me show you my gongfu. : 从石头後拿出钉钯，舞了起来。小女子暗暗点头。当八戒的钉色舞到小女子面前时， : 被小女子一把抓住，往石山後面一拖，八戒被拖了过去。 : 八戒：娘子，你怎麽这麽大的力气？ : Darling. Why are you so strong? : 小女子：有本事你把我拖出去呀。 : Pull me out if you can. : 八戒做出用力拖的样子，没有发现拖出来的却是悟空。悟空一松手，八戒摔倒在地。 : 八戒：娘子，你怎麽这麽狠心把我摔倒了? 不要开玩笑了。 : How could you let me fall down? Don't kid any longer. fall? Stop kidding around. : 悟空大笑：呆子，看看我是谁！ : You Silly! Look at me. Who am I? silly! (虽然"you silly"还蛮娘的 XD 我会用 fool) : 八戒一看，吓得跳起来：齐天大圣，我的妈呀。 : My god! You are Mahatma! Mahatma是齐天大圣吗? 直接用Monkey King可能较好... : 八戒转身想跑，被悟空拦住，两人打了起来，八戒不是对手，被悟空压住，不能动弹。 : 悟空：呆子，你可还敢在这里害人不成？ : You silly! Dare you harm others any more? fool! How dare you bully people here! : 八戒：不敢了，不敢了。 : No, I dare not! No, no more! I'll change my ways! : 悟空： : I bet you dare not. I bet you will. : 悟空放开，八戒转身想跑，被悟空一把抓住耳朵，疼得直叫。 : 悟空：呆子，想往哪里去？ : You silly, where are you going? : 八戒：我已答应你，不再闹事了，干嘛还不放我走？ : I'll never make trouble any more. Why don't you let me go? : 悟空：呆子，我带你去见取经人。 : You silly, I'm taking you to meet the sutra-seeker. : 八戒：什麽？取经人来了？ : What? Has Tangseng come? : 悟空：走吧。 : Yes. Let's go! : 两人在台上走半圈，来到房前。 : Finally, Tangseng gave the pig a name Bajie. And the master are satisfied is : with his new prentice. All of them are on their way to the west. And they continue on their way to the West. 请众高手努力鞭~ -- I let the melody shine, let it cleanse my mind, I feel free now But the airways are clean and there's nobody singing to me now -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve --

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