作者DrGolden (不理性员工)
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标题Re: [中英]有关於实验室的中翻英!
时间Thu Dec 16 16:55:07 2010
※ 引述《akuei67 (akuei)》之铭言：
: When test result is FAIL, request suppliers to improve, and lab should re-test
: after improving.
: 修改成上述~
: 烦请再给点意见~谢谢
: ※ 引述《akuei67 (akuei)》之铭言：
: : 测试报告结果FAIL要求供应商改善如可以改善需重测。
: : Request suppliers to re-test if they are able to improve.
: : "测试报告结果为FAIL"
: : 这个要加在哪里比较通顺呢?
: : 谢谢
你的原句:
When test result is FAIL, (主词?) request suppliers to improve (受词?),
and lab should re-test after improving.
不做太多修改的情况下, 我的建议是:
When the test result is(shows) FAIL,
suppliers have to improve their performance, and receive test again.
供参考.
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