小弟要写自传及准备自我介绍 想请问各位用字及流畅度,文法是否ok? 因为我是第一次用英文写自我介绍 升学要用的 不知这样是否合适 或有什麽地方需改进的 请不吝指教 感谢~ (如果违反版规 请告知 3q~) My department is the Department of Information Management. I had studied many program language and know information security management.I hope I could contribute to society in my future, so I will keep learning hard and will not give up. 原意：我是资讯管理系的学生, 我曾修过许多程式语言课程且了解资讯安全管理, 希望未来能够对社会有所贡献,所以我会持续学习并且抱着不放弃的精神 My name is SYU,SIAO-MING,I will graduate from national Taiwan university of science and technology. I am active,I had take part in hot music club and basketball team of information management department. My average scores keep improving because I learn time planning that make me work effective. My favorite subject is finance, because it related to our life and I feel Its' interesting. My interests are reading, listening music, drawing and playing basketball. Furthermore I have excellent computer skills, including word-processing, computer graphics, and web page design. I would like to be a CFO(chief financial officer) and hope do something for society, so I will keep learning hard in the future. 原意：我的名字是SYU,SIAO-MING,将毕业於NTUST 我的态度很积极,我曾参加热音社及资管系篮球队 我的平均分数持续成长,因为我学会如何做时间规划,所以做起事来更有效率 我最喜爱的科目为财务管理,因为它贴近我们的生活而且我觉得很有趣 我喜爱阅读,听音乐,画画及打篮球 此外 我有杰出的电脑能力, 例如 文书撰写,电脑美工及网页设计 未来我想成为CFO 且希望能为社会带来贡献,所以我未来将努力学习 --

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