作者tengharold (RoadMan_A)
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标题Re: [英中] 47个单字，却只有两个标点符号的句子
时间Fri Mar 16 03:40:01 2012
※ 引述《hankxtina (Bristina Aguipears' Luv)》之铭言：
: The Contractor shall furnish contacts, connected its cables and raceway for
: remote visual and audible alarms on the annunciator of the fire detection and
: protection central control panel located in the central control room for one or
: more of the following status/alarm situations as a minimum.
: 承包商应为中央控制室内，火警探测与防护中央控制盘信号器，远端视觉与听觉警报器，
: 提供接点、连接电缆与滚道，下列一个或多个，作为最低限度之状态/警报情况。
: 我的中文造诣真的很差，
: 加上这句子实在太长，
: 我真的不知该如何把它翻好，
: 麻烦大家救救我，
: 拜托拜托！＞＜
: 我还有一个疑问，
: 为何逗点後的connect会是过去式呀？
: 我觉得自己的文法认知应该没什麽问题呀！＠＠...
我看起来是：
The Contractor shall [as a minimum],
1) furnish contacts [and]
2) connect [这里接过去式感觉不通] its cables and raceway for remote visual and
audible alarms on the annunciator of the fire detection and protection central
control panel[, which is] located in the central control room[,] for one or
more of the following status/alarm situations.
请大家指点~
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1F：→ l10nel:好奇，这种疑似文法不通的「伪」英文是哪里来的？ 03/16 05:02
2F：推 noatu:我还以为工程文件常会这样"落落长"(尤其是营建跟专利等) 03/16 07:36
3F：→ noatu:不有个原则好像是 Contractor 用大写 就不须加 the 不是吗 03/16 07:37
4F：→ noatu:*不过 03/16 07:38
5F：推 meowlynn:将connected改为connecting会比较顺吗？ 03/16 11:24
6F：推 l10nel:感觉也是要说(by) connecting...，但这和 and connect 意思 03/16 11:31
7F：→ l10nel:差不多（即使不完全相同），its 改 their 更好吧？ 03/16 11:32
8F：推 hankxtina:这是台电电厂规范的内容，可能是台湾人写的吧！XD 03/16 11:35