作者teppei1 (彧子)
看板Translation
标题[英中] 请帮忙砍一下是否有错误之处
时间Tue Apr 17 20:49:57 2012
Because I want to work in marketing in the future,
I join the department of marketing and logistics management.
I want to know more about the marketing job
, so I worked at xxx as a part time sales
promoter at the shopping mall,I like to interact with many people
and talk with them.
Through this job, I understand what the customer
think and what they want from listening
, because of this job, I learned more about marketing skills,
it's a special experience to me.
(由於在未来我想做行销的职业 我进入了行销与流通管理系
我想更了解行销工作,所以我在xxx公司,当卖场促销人员,
我喜欢接触人群并与他们交谈
透过这份工作 我了解到消费者的想法,也藉由倾听的过程知道他们想要什麽
因为这份工作我学到更多有关於行销的技巧,这对我来说是特别的工作经验)
请帮我看一下是否有错误的地方,之前英文老师教我们
如果想要知道文法是否有错误 就把写的句子用google搜寻一次
看是否有人跟自己写的一样 虽然有用这招 但是还是怕有错误
希望各位能指正 谢谢!!
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