※ 引述《JinSha (http://0rz.tw/h1hXC)》之铭言： 这次就很简单跟原po讨论一下我看到的问题，就不仔细改了，也不查经济名词 : 内需堪忧！元大宝华：民间消费成长速度缓慢恐成常态 : The prospects of domestic demand appear grim! Yuanta-Polaris: The slow growth : of domestic consumption would perhaps become a normality : 主计总处昨(25)日公布今(2013)年前4月实质平均薪资50562元，创近4年最低，元大宝华 : 综合经济研究院今(25)日指出，在国内外景气改善速度缓慢、未来动向也扑朔迷离下，「 : 平均薪资的成长速度恐续缓」，又购买力持续受到物价上扬侵蚀，即便能期待厂商在景气 : 倏忽好转之际，采取发放非经常性薪资的方式奖励受雇员工，但此一方式相对於经常性薪 : 资的提升而言，难稳定提升消费成长动能，「未来台湾民间消费成长速度缓慢恐将成为常 : 态」。 : The Directorate General of Budget, Accounting, and Statistics released : yesterday (25th) that the real wage of the first four months this year (2013) released [...] that 有点怪 : averages 50,562 dollars, hitting a new low in nearly four years. Today(25th), 英文 dollars 几乎都是美元，台币请写 NT Dollars yesterday 跟 today 都是 25 号？这种明显错误就算错在原文都要改，读者不会认为原 文有问题，只会认为译者该死 : Yuanta-Polaris Research Institute pointed out that "the growth of average wage : would continue at a slow pace" due to the slowly improving domestic and : international economy and the bewildering future trends. Moreover, people's due to the 交代因果，所以一般 due to the 後面接的_名词_ 是因 而你 due to the 後面接的名词是 economy 跟 trends，但实际的因是"缓慢"跟"扑朔迷 离"，导致英文的因果交代不流畅 考虑改为 slow pace of [economy] and bewildering nature of [trends] 或是其他写法 : purchasing power is eroded by rising prices. Even though firms can be expected : to adopt the policy of rewarding employees with non-regular wages as the : economy suddenly improves, this policy would not stably raise the momentum of : consumption growth compared to the growth of regular wages would do. "In the ^^^^^^^^^^^ as : future, the slow growth of domestic consumption in Taiwan would perhaps : become a normality. : 问题：不太清楚这里的文法，就是"compared to the growth of regular wages"的後面 : a. 加would do的话文法正确吗？ 我会把 do 砍掉 [A] would not [v.] as B would. : b. 若都不加，以句点结束这句，这样文法正确吗？ 不行 : c. 加does的话文法正确吗？ 不行 : 与去年同期相比，4月工业及服务业受雇员工每人平均薪资增加1.11%至42011元，连续第3 : 个月成长，但经常性薪资仅增0.47%，主要是因非经常性薪资成长7.01%所带动；而基本工 : 资虽调升1.42%，轻微提升约170万劳工的收入，但只占受雇员工人数24%，其余受雇者月 : 薪未能同时有较明显调升。 : Compared to the same period last year, the average monthly wage of employees : in industrial and service sectors increases by 1.11% to 42,011 dollars in increased : April, a third consecutive month of growth. But the growth is mainly driven by was : the 7.01% growth in non-regular wage payments; average regular wage grows only : 0.47%. 上面一段我会用过去式，因为是在讲4月的状况，现在已经快七月了 : Although the 1.42% basic wage increase has slightly boosted about 1.7 : million workers' income, only 24% of all employees has been benefited; other : employees have not enjoyed a more significant raise in monthly pay. : 问题："the average monthly wage..in April increases by"的increase， : 用现在式对吗，还是要用过去式increased呢? 我会用increased : 问题：But适合作为句子的开头吗，有没有文法或常不常用的问题，还是没差？ 严谨文章不可用 But 开头，但现在英文越来越不严谨了。。。 : 问题：the 1.42% basic wage increase has slightly boosted about 1.7 : million workers' income这句中，"has boosted"的时态正确吗，还是要改成 : boosts才对？以及has been benefited和 have not enjoyed的时态正确吗？ 我会用had boosted, [had] benefited, had not enjoyed -- 'Cause it's a bittersweet symphony, this life Trying to make ends meet, You're a slave to money then you die -Bittersweet Symphony, The Verve --

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