作者pilihans (霹雳汉)
看板X-Japan
标题[心得] Kurenai中文翻译
时间Sun Feb 19 07:10:31 2006
KURENAI
作词:Yoshiki 作曲:Yoshiki
I could not look back, you'd gone away from me
我无法回头 你已离开我
I felt my heartaches, I was afraid of following you
我感到心痛,也害怕跟随你
when I was looking the shadows on the wall
当我看着映射在墙上的阴影
(I) started running into the night to find the truth in me
我开始跑向那黑夜 去找寻真实的我
in the crowded street
在喧闹的的大街上
you're standing all alone
你孤独的伫立着
the shadow of the days hide your heart
过去日子的阴影遮蔽住你的心
you are bringing down the heart of the night
你的心已随着这夜晚死去
keeping everything off
早已万念俱灰
as if something gonna force you
像是被不断的逼迫
now you're running into the storm
你正跑向暴风雨中
can't you see I'm always on your mind
难道你看不到我总是在你心里?
tell me why you leave me alone
告诉我你为何留我独自一人
when I was gonna be losing you on my mind
我将把你从我心里抹去
found my heart in soil
我的心已被埋葬
I'm looking back the days
回头细数过去的那些日子
these are gonna break my heart
这让我心碎
but i can't never hold back
但是我不能永远活在回忆中
all of you in my memory
你在我记忆里的一切
is still shining in my heart
在我心里还是如此的鲜明亮丽
now you're wearing the mysterious lights
现在的你不再是以前的你
it keeps me sticking into my heart
这深深的伤了我的心
my heart has been gonna dye deep red with all of pain
我的心已被伤痛染成血红色
there's no one to cure my pain only with out you
失去的你的伤痛 没有人可以治癒
how I try to shout, how i try to run
我试着呐喊,我试着逃跑
there's nothing i can do
我已无能为力
the wall hiding my heart is never broken again
我的心已锁在城墙里 不会再被伤害
how I try to break
无论什麽样的伤害
as if something gonna force you
now you're running into the storm
can't you see I'm always on your mind
can't you see I'm always on your mind
tell me why you leave me alone
(同上)
my heart has been gonna dye deep red with all of pain
there's no one to cure my pain only with out you
how I try to shout, how I try to run
there's nothing i can do
the wall hiding my heart is never broken again
how I try to break
(同上)
as if something gonna force you
now you're running into the storm
can't you see I'm always on your mind
tell me why you leave me alone
(同上)
cry in deep red...
在血红色的伤痛里哭泣
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这首歌真的难翻到不行 囧>
像之前某位版友说的 这些东西真的
很难用文字描述出来 需要用感觉
有些语义不太清楚的歌词 我能力还不够
翻译的很漂亮 只能大约猜测yo大所描述
的意境 再加以修改
如果有哪里翻错或是不恰当 欢迎指教
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