作者jowesley (乔巴爱BALine!!)
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标题[情报] Amber 小六 作文 - Milkman's Story
时间Wed Aug 18 11:41:07 2010
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Milkman's Story
By Amber Liu
6th grade, Los Angeles County
Hale Middle School - Richard Herrera, Teacher
Narrated by Rio Americano High School
DING! The lunch bell rang.
A flood of people ran to the cafeteria.
After I bought lunch, I sat down and opened a carton of milk.
As someone walked by, he accidentally pushed me, which made me spill my milk.
As I stared at the puddle a white figure popped up.
It said, "Milkman's the name, Healthy bones is my game," I froze in amazement.
"Who are you?" I asked.
"Weren't you listening silly head?" "Sorry".
He then asked me "Why do you drink milk?" "My mom told me to," I replied.
"Did your mom ever tell you what a delight it is to drink milk?"
"What?" I asked.
He suddenly said, "Follow me and I will tell you everything from the beginning,
" and jumped in the puddle.
I was then sucked into a portal, which led me to a dairy farm.
On my shoulder stood Milkman.
"Farms like these," Milkman said, "You won't believe what cows eat,
their food is a mixture of left over cereal, chips, cottonseed, hay,
barley, and field grass.
Cows are fed around eight pounds of food a day and drink thirty to forty
gallons of water.
When the cow has a baby or calf, the mother cow starts making the milk.
" As Milkman was done explaining, my vision blurred and the scenery changed.
Milkman pointed to a cow and a man in a small building.
"That what you see right there is a farmer milking his cow.
The cow stores her milk in her udder and everyday the cow produces about eight
gallons of milk a day.
Can you believe this special room is called a Parlor.
" Milkman then pointed to the cows in the building.
"Cows are usually milked by hand or machine but what is amazing is that
the machine or person does not hurt the cow.
Again my vision blurred and the area changed.
This time I appeared in a factory.
Milkman stood on a pipe with milk flowing inside of it.
He looked liked if he had been waiting for thirty minutes.
"Finally" he said once he saw me.
"Where are we?" I asked.
"We're in a milk factory.
This is the place where the milk is transferred to be cleaned.
The particular word for cleaning the milk is called pasteurization.
Pasteurization is when milk is heated to a boiling one hundred forty-five
degrees Fahrenheit, which kills the germs.
Then they are put into a refrigerator to be cooled down.
Once again the place changed and my vision blurred.
This time I found myself in a chair in front of nutrition fact table.
Milkman, holding a long stick said, "Pay attention, have you ever heard
the saying milk does a body good?" "No," I said.
"Well calcium is what makes your body bone and teeth strong and Vitamin D
promotes normal growth.
So now you know why you need milk."
As he finished I found myself back at school.
From that point on I drank milk because it's good for me.
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1F:推 asd2260123:不错啊 我都写不出来了囧rz 08/18 11:55
2F:→ jowesley:一整个在练英文阅读XD 很好呀~希望有更多被挖出来XDDD 08/18 12:14
3F:推 reirei0916:好有趣阿XDDDDDD 08/18 21:12
4F:推 elfpeia:Amber有当小说家的潜力喔XD喝牛奶的好处也能写得这麽有趣~ 08/18 22:29
5F:推 black198299:真可爱啊~Amber!!!也太爱牛奶了吧!!!!XDDDD 08/18 23:02