作者hahastarr (漫步中的哈哈星人)
看板poetry
标题[创作] Another two wishes
时间Mon Nov 8 07:32:37 2010
Could I please have a box of chocolates that are
Made of your feelings and dreams so
I could feed myself with those when
You keep saying you're alright but
I just don't believe it
?
*
Could I please have a jar of pills that are
Made of your smell and whispers so
I could sleep away the pain of
Missing you too often and
Too much
?
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1F：推 darksign:Good stuff! But IMHO scent would sound 74.64.46.185 11/09 15:36
2F：→ darksign:better than smell. xD 74.64.46.185 11/09 15:36
3F：→ hahastarr:cheers mate I was going to use the 210.54.148.202 11/09 16:01
4F：→ hahastarr:word 'scent' but I found it too +ve & 210.54.148.202 11/09 16:03
5F：→ hahastarr:pleasant and thats not a word I wanna 210.54.148.202 11/09 16:06
6F：→ hahastarr:use on a guy. Somehow the word keeps 210.54.148.202 11/09 16:07
7F：→ hahastarr:reminding me of the film 'Scent of a 210.54.148.202 11/09 16:08
8F：→ hahastarr:woman', funny huh?! 210.54.148.202 11/09 16:10
9F：→ hahastarr:xD 210.54.148.202 11/09 16:11
10F：推 darksign:oh dear... a guy? lol 74.64.46.185 11/09 21:23
11F：→ spacedunce5:scent of a woman +1 61.228.79.75 11/09 22:30