※ 引述《nancy093 (好晚)》之铭言： : 1.There is little affection between Asia's economic titans. : Japan lobbies Europe and Russia not to sell advanced weapons : to China's military; China opposes Japan's aspirations to a : seat on the United Nations Security Council. China gets angry : at Japan's friendly relations with Taiwan; Japan wonders why : it is giving aid to a nation that has a program to put a man : on the moon. : 在亚洲经济体间产生了一点影响，日本游说欧洲和俄国不要卖先进 `````````````` Q1.:改为"激起了一波涟漪"?因为affection的确有影响的意思 还是 有更好的词句可以代换? : 武器给中国军队；中国反对日本想在联合国安全理事会取得席位的 : 事；中国对於日本和台湾的友好关系感到愤怒；日本思索为何要帮助 : 一个计画将人送至月球的国家。 : 2.For years, Japan reflexively smoothed over any frictions with : China. But its patience may be spent. Last November, Japanese : destroyers chased a Chinese submarine from the waters around : Japan's southernmost islands; in December, Japan formally : idetified China as a potential military threat. Ignoring Chinese : objections, Japan welcomed Lee Teng-hui, a former president of : Taiwan, on a visit in January, and the Dalai Lama is expected : in April. : 多年以来，日本自动平抚和中国的任何磨擦，但日本的耐性已到了极 : 限。在去年11月日本的驱逐监在日本南方海域群岛附近，驱逐到中国的潜 : 水艇；在12月时，日本正式宣布中国为一潜在的军事威胁。无视於中国的 : 反对，日本欢迎前台湾总统李登辉於一月来访，而达赖喇嘛也会在四月到 : 日本访问。 : 3.Behind Japan's new attitude is a new postwar generation of : politicians, led by Mr.Koizumi and Shinzo Abe, currently his most : likely successor. They believe World War two should no longer : haunt Japan's relations with its neighbors. But they see in China : a growing unwillingness to let it go. : 日本新态度的幕後主使人是战後新一代的政治人物-小泉先生和目前 : 最有希望的继承人- 安倍晋三。他们相信第二次世界大战应不再是日本和其 : 邻国的梦魇，但他们在中国看到越来越多的人不愿就此放过。 Q2:所谓分词子句的部分是只有分号的地方吗?还是有-ing的地方 像: " Ignoring Chinese objections, Japan welcomed Lee Teng-hui,..." 这样的地方要改吗? --

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