※ 引述《satirical (牙龈里有核弹)》之铭言： : 拜托大家帮我润色一下... : 因为是第一次要写出正式会议的英文司仪稿 : 我本身也没有专业的翻译背景 : 所以想请大家帮帮忙... 其实大部分都没什麽问题，一点小地方： : 1.xxx会议即将开始,请各位来宾关掉您随身携带的行动电话,呼叫器 : 及闹表(我搞不太懂这是什麽...) : 谢谢您的合作! : 这里我是直接翻 xxx Conference is going to begin,(自己觉得这里好像用的不太恰当) will begin shortly听起来比较正式 : Please turn off your cell phone, beeper, and alarm watch(?) 闹表的翻译正确，乾脆加一句：or any other sound-producing device. : Thank you for your cooperation. : 2.首先,请几位来宾为我们致词 : First,let us welcome our honorable guests to give us their opening speeches. (guest speakers) for opening remarks. 因为是致词的所以可称之为讲者，开幕致词可说remarks give us可讲可不讲，因为想当然是对观众演讲，建议 用for较为简链 : 3.现在,让我们请大会主席xxx进行Plenary speech并主持这场会议 : Now, we would like to welcome the session chair xxx to give us : plenary lecture and direct(or host?) the conference . 建议改成：welcome the session chair xxx, who will deliver the pleanry lecture and host/moderate this session. moderate是引言人，要不要用要看 上述主席的角色而定 : 4.这场会议到此结束,请各位来宾至外面玄关享用点心. 下一场研讨会议开始时间为10:10 : 地点在地下一楼,请准时入场 : This part of the session ends here, please enjoy some refreshments in : the lounge(?) : The next conference will begin at 10:10 in the basement floor first. : We appreciate your attention to the time schedule, thank you very much. This concludes our current session. Please enjoy some refreshments in the hallway/lobby//near the entrance(视实地格局而定，lounge通常是一间休息室) Our next session will begin at 10:10 in the first basement. We appreciate your punctuality. : 5.今天下午会议结束後,5:40在大门口集合,有专车送各位贵宾到xxx餐厅享用晚餐 : After today's session, please proceed to the front gate by 5:40. There will : be a shuttle bus for our guests to the resturant "xxx". : We will serve you a delicious dinner and hope you enjoy it. : Have a good time. ...to the resturant "xxx" for a hearty dinner. : 6.谢谢各位来宾参与 : Again, we would like to thank you for your participation,and wish you a : fruitful session. : Have a good evening. Have a lovely/wonderful evening可能听起来更尊敬些 : 以上的中文是对方给我的大致架构要我再延伸写草稿 : 英文的部份就是我写的 因为是学术研讨性质的会议希望合宜适切而且有礼 : 希望大家能够多多指点 : 谢谢!!! : 感激不尽... -- 不对的地方希望各位指教 --

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