作者egghead (egghead)
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标题Re: 中译英_不知道翻的正确度如何,请帮小弟看看
时间Fri Nov 4 02:05:49 2005
纯个人感觉 有没有比较好就看需要罗
我现弄到这里 我有事得离开
但是 我很想问你,这两篇文章是一样的吗?
总觉得中英文的内容不一样到可以视为两篇独立的文章,只是刚好在讲述同一件事而已...
希望不是我单方面的误解
※ 引述《BBEN (ㄚ楠)》之铭言:
: 自1998年起,台湾开始发展大型TFT-LCD面板产业,经过8年多的努力,
: 筚路蓝缕、历经一番艰辛後,在台湾高科技产业史中,所营造出的成
: 果直逼发展已20多年的半导体产业,同为产值上看兆元的明星级产业。
: 【英译】International TFT-LCD industry, undergoing eight hard
which underwent
: years, has been creating fat benefits which can be compared
is comparable to
: with those of the semi-conductor industry-- also a promising
x
: industry with the profits of up to trillions-- since 1998.
x x
^which has developed for more than 20 years x
*产值=product value,不是profit* *营业额 和 利润 是不同的*
: 由於笔记型电脑的蓬勃发展,进而带动中上游原物料的需求逐年增加
: ,於是,逐渐在台南科学园区、新竹科学园区、桃园工业区域形成光电
: 群落;也让台湾得以与南韩一较高下,甚至於今年的产值一举超越韩国。
: 【英译】The number of International TFT-LCD (the essential materials
volume/quantity
: of NOTEBOOKS) doubles because of the increasing demands. International
*The~demands 这句话逻辑问题很大 建议自行重写*
: TFT-LCD industry, therefore, groups in several of locations in Taiwan
x(这是系统性的问题,四回目)
: such as Tainan science community, Hsinchu science community, Taoyuan
^the
: science community, competing those of South Korea, even better in
which is in competition with those... ,and even tops
: productive amount in 2005。
korea of production in 2005
: 但在2005年第二季起,中国大陆的面板产业也进入量产阶段。面对於大陆的急起直追,
: 以及南韩与日本的竞争,腹背受敌的双重压力下,再加上台湾後段模组的厂商陆续至
: 中国大陆投资生产,引发台湾产官学界高度关注与探讨。
: 【英译】 However, Taiwan's LCD-industry-- facing with the China's economic
: thriving in recent years, the competitors of South Korea and Japan, the
: investment from Taiwan-- raises highly caring and discussion technologically,
: officially and scholarly. China's LCD-industry has been productive since
: (2005第二季)*注
: *注 这里的第几季应该是商业的定义,我不懂
: 本研究及以此为出发点,利用Poter的五力分析理论,SWOT分析理论为分析工具,
: 再加上产品生命周期理论的论述,从竞争优势的观点剖析台日韩三国TFT-LCD
: 产业发展与大陆面板产业的关联性、竞争与互补程度,并对台湾面板产业
: 的未来发展提出建议。而主要的结论如下:
: 【英译】This research, 以此为出发点*注, 利用Poter的五力分析理论SWOT
: 分析理论为分析工具,under the discourse of product life cycle theory(?)
: ,从competition edge的观点(?), mainly tries to analyze the TFT-LCD
: industry development in Taiwan, Japan and South Korea, and the connection,
: competition and compensation among them.
: There are three conclusions as following:
: *注 "以此为出发点",这种句型,论文应该常读到,我没经验,不敢乱译
: 一、 两岸TFT-LCD产业比较方面,台湾在需求条件(the demand)、
: 生产要素(the production)、支援与相关性产业(support the related industry)、
: 企业整体性管理(industrial integrated management)与政府支持度(official
: support)五项因素比较下,仅劳力市场与内需市场两项因素居於劣势,政府支持度
: 的积极性不相上下,其余因素相较下,呈现出居於优势的表徵。
: 【英译】Official comparison between Taiwan and China in TFT-LCD industry:
: Considering the factors of demand, the production, support the related
: industry, industrial integrated management and official support, Taiwan
: is weak in labor market and demand market aspect without worrying about
: the official support. The whole situation still favors Taiwan.
: 二、 在台湾的TFT-LCD产业赴中国大陆投资因素分析下,後段模组厂商前往投资
: ,主要目的是劳力需求与内需市场的开发,进而着眼於中国大陆市场的封闭性
: 、先进者的优势与全球布局策略。而主要制程技术仍深根台湾。
: 【英译】With the analysis of the investment-in-China factors of TFT-LCD
: industry, 後段模组厂商 start to invest in China because of the factors
: of labor and marketing while they-- considering 封闭性of China market,
: the edge of the leader and globalization strategy-- still keep the original
: productive technology in Taiwan.
: 三、 在两岸TFT-LCD产业的竞争或互补分析上,目前台湾和中国大陆的TFT-LCD
: 产业呈现的是微量竞争状态,抑或是接近互补模式。但就长期观察下,中国大陆若
: 能排除其不利发展的因素,加上政府的强力奥援下,将可能取代台湾领先者的角色地位。
: 【英译】Taiwan competes with China by minimum edge in the analysis of the
: competition or the compensation. In the long term, however, China could
: replace Taiwan as long as she can rule out the factors which hinder her
: from advancing and lead in TFT-LCD industry.
: 望指点一番
: 不胜感激
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