前言:文章是改编自澳洲本地报纸,一篇关於核能的论战,以下只撷取标题及第一段 供各位评断 正文: The greening of nuclear power Could nuclear power, the long-time scourge of the green movement, save the world from global warming? Until recently, the question would have seemed unthinkable. The terrible human cost of nuclear error is not merely textbook theory. But, as global greenhouse gas emissions soar, and scientific consensus firms around the perils of inaction, the pall over nuclear power is lifting. Nuclear energy is virtually emission free. Some influential environmentalists already have realigned themselves with the global nuclear industry in arguing that it is the only viable means of drastically reducing greenhouse gas emissions and, thus, heading off catastrophic climate change. 问题: 1.标题因为根据内文,green用动词化的表达方式,所以我翻"败部复活的核能" 被讲师画错...他翻"绿化的核能"....(核能来种树的吗?.... ) 2. global warming....我想当然尔翻成"全球暖化",又被扣分... 他认为要翻成,"全球变暖".... 3. "the pall over nuclear power is lifting"...因为pall有棺罩之意 所以我翻"被盖棺论定的核能发电也有重见天日的机会了"..... 他说,什麽叫盖棺论定?,什麽叫棺罩?台湾都这麽搞的啊?.... 他翻,"核能的阴影正在散去"... 後记:虽说是自作孽不可活,不过现在我既然已选择到澳洲读翻译课程, 就得好好面对课程中上自讲师到同学都是大陆人的现实..... 现在要向版上诸位求教的是一篇用来翻译练习的文章, 有很多部分,我自认自己的翻译才有带出原文的意思, 但都被讲师大笔一挥扣了分....虽然我在课堂上屡屡提出质疑... 但他要不是说"中文没这麽用",便是说,"台湾人的用语太文诌诌"... 今天还有更经典的回我说,"不知道可不可以这样用".....囧rz 我实在是胸中一口闷气难以宣泄..想说版上能手辈出...中文应该都比我好 看看是否真的我翻的有问题,还是... 先跟有耐心看完的版友谢过了... --

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