先加上标点试试: ※ 引述《uefang (云飞)》之铭言： : 我想问 Mariah Carey 的一首老歌 : 以下这样翻是不是洽当 可以在帮我翻漂亮一点吗? : 恳请赐教 谢谢 ^^" : ------------------------------- (Mariah) I would give up everything Before I'd separate myself from you; After so much suffering, I've finally found unvarnished truth. I was all by myself for the longest time: So cold inside, And the hurt from the heart it would not subside. I felt like dying Until you saved my life. (Chorus - all) Thank God, I found you; I was lost without you. My every wish and every dream Somehow became reality When you brought the sunlight -- Completed my whole life. I'm overwhelmed with gratitude; 'Cause, baby, I'm so thankful i found you. (Joe) I would give you everything; There's nothing in this world I wouldn't do To ensure your happiness. I'll cherish every part of you, Because without you beside me, I can't survive -- Don't wanna try. If you're keeping me warm each and every night, I'll be all right -- 'Cause I need you in my life. -Bridge- (Mariah & Joe) See, I was so desolate Before you came to me. Looking back, I guess it shows That we were destined to shine After the rain to appreciate The gift of what we have -- And I'd go through it all over again To be able to feel this way. 我比较喜欢像 "A Summer Place" 那样的歌词。 :) --

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