作者dream1314 (我是香蕉姐姐)
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标题[问题] 可以帮我看哪里怪怪的吗?
时间Thu Nov 15 21:56:11 2007
简单的色调 行走於自然主义 低调的奢华 生活简单却也精采 似花一般 静静的 绽放
simple tone, walk along naturalism , understated luxury, live is simply also actually brilliant, as flowers effloresce still
我的设计理念
可以帮我修一下吗?
3Q
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1F：→ humblesam:simple colour tone that goes along with the essence 11/16 01:37
2F：→ humblesam:of naturalism. embedded luxury. lives simply, but 11/16 01:38
3F：→ humblesam:also brilliantly. blossomed peacefully like flowers. 11/16 01:44
4F：→ humblesam:标点符号怪怪的~ 11/16 01:49
5F：推 Kirk:写中文很容易没有主词 流於铺陈叙述 要翻就会变了味道 11/16 03:33