※ 引述《stila24 (老大不小哩~)》之铭言： : ────────────────────────────────────── : [选]参考段落： : 4. What do you consider to be the applicant’s weaknesses or developmental : needs? : Overall, she is a really good co-worker to me. If I have to give : some advice on her development, I think she needs to develop the ability of : leadership in order to deal with more complicated situations in her future. : Public school is not as opened as other social settings. Being a good teacher : to her is not a problem, however, being a future leader for higher position : needs more learning. Thus, I am happy for her that she has alternative working : experience since she had left my school. It is helpful for her to be more : mature. Hopefully you will provide her with higher level interaction with : educational contexts. 试改写（请再改：） She is a really good worker. If I were to advise her, I would suggest for her to develop further her leadership capability so that she would excel in handling more complex situations; I am saying so because the public school is a relatively simple environment compared to the "outside" world. She is already an excellent teacher, and additional studies would help her become a true leader in higher positions in the future. I am especially glad that since her graduation she had obtained other non-school work experiences, and I am happy to see that she has become quite self-assured in the process. 要小心，说「某人逐渐成熟」，尤其是用 mature 这个字，可能会带来「啊，过去她很幼 稚」的误解。假设这是申请美国硕博班的话，她会和很多美国大学生竞争。而美国大二、 三的学生「成熟」早已不是问题。 : 试 译 文： : 我认识她五年了，她在2003年夏天，研究毕业後就来应徵，当时我们的学校才刚落成三年 : ，很需要有热情的老师加入教学和研究团队。因为她的试敎新奇有创意，把国文阅读和写 : 作敎的很有效果，因此她开始成为教师的ㄧ员。我们学校是个小学校，每个年级的班级数 : 不多，因此我和她时常讨论教学和参与每天的会议 : 其他事项：无 --

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