作者usread (usread)
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标题[横行蟹译]雍正帝诗一首 2010.9.24
时间Fri Sep 24 14:30:34 2010
闭门一日隔尘嚣，深许渊明懒折腰
观奕偶将傍着悟，横琴只按古音调
新情都向杯中尽，旧虑皆从枕上销
信得浮生俱是幻，此身何处不逍遥
不再是闲人的不等闲人雍正帝
Hustle shut out for one day,
Yuanming* had so rightly done.
Wathcing rounds of chess inspires;
Old notes only I play on.
How I feel I drink away,
What I worried slept to none.
Life is just an illusion;
Leisure is where I have gone.
One who can no longer afford idleness
*A famous literatus of Jin dynasty, who quit his government post and
went home because he realized it was not worthy of stooping himself over
just for some meager pay.
去年一次译了两首，乾脆都贴上来
纯属意译式「洋七音节律诗」，勉强凑成 abxb, abxb
也算聊备一律半韵
看看从「个个没把握」的皇子心情，到万人之上的寡人心情对照转换
陶氏典故太长，无力压缩，只好取巧化为footnote
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1F：推 lifegetter:想起 Bartleby the Scribner 的 I would prefer not to 09/24 15:24
2F：→ Mosquitoe: v (终於碰到我知道的典故XD) 09/24 15:40
3F：推 johanna:感谢 usread 大慷慨分享诗句英译，已新增一个专区， 09/24 20:59
4F：→ johanna:供 usread 大整理文章之用（10.译句系列 → 11.横行蟹译） 09/24 20:59
5F：→ usread:谢谢版主，只怕後续无力，零零落落几篇而已 09/24 22:52
6F：→ johanna:几篇已是珠玑无数，usread大随兴便是 :P 09/24 22:57